Short and sweet and leaving the reader panting for more! :D
(I was momentarily thrown by 'The two officers of the TSS Ecliptica—one a young ensign, and the other her experienced captain—locked eyes.' thinking 'wait a minute!' I thought Ensign Rowe was male! and so's the Captain! and then went 'duh' HER is the Ecliptica. : )
Oh ho hooooo! the plot thickens!!!
Short and sweet and leaving the reader panting for more! :D
(I was momentarily thrown by 'The two officers of the TSS Ecliptica—one a young ensign, and the other her experienced captain—locked eyes.' thinking 'wait a minute!' I thought Ensign Rowe was male! and so's the Captain! and then went 'duh' HER is the Ecliptica. : )
I had to go back and re-read to see what you mean... yeah, I could probably have made some different choices there. lol
nah, right now ‘I’ve’ probably got the mental computing power of a decomposing potato. 😝
It’s all good 👍🏼